The plot developments are original, the servant battles are exciting, the canon cast are in-character barring any changes caused by the nail, and Shirou's childhood interactions with Rin and Sakura are adorable. However, there are many, many typos, which takes away from my enjoyment of the story. The content is good enough that they're not a dealbreaker for me, but I can't in good conscience recommend the story because of them.
FanficRecs Great content, but a lot of typos
The plot developments are original, the servant battles are exciting, the canon cast are in-character barring any changes caused by the nail, and Shirou's childhood interactions with Rin and Sakura are adorable. However, there are many, many typos, which takes away from my enjoyment of the story. The content is good enough that they're not a dealbreaker for me, but I can't in good conscience recommend the story because of them.